XCenter Ch.1

whoo! sorry I haven't been active. I was working on this, as well as stuff in life etc.

but anyways what is this? you may ask it is the first chapter of my first light novel that I'm uploading for free! when you click the download button you get in PDF form. I want to see if my stories are interesting, and since it is my first time doing a light novel I would love your opinions on how's it like as a light novel. so feel free to critique to your hearts content! (as long as it's respectful) don't be too harsh on the art though some of the drawings aren't complete.
I plan to work on this and then sell it on amazon as an E-book. I just hope everything turns out well. =.=

Edit 1: Fixed some small errors here and there